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Eowyn said in August 1st, 2010 at 8:48 pm

These paragraphs are brilliant. I’ve never really analyzed them before. I love reading your insights here. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Braden Bell said in August 2nd, 2010 at 7:33 am

Fascinating and instructive! Thanks for the tutorial, G.G.

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Lisa Hawkins said in August 2nd, 2010 at 9:47 am

This and the previous blog post were excellent–I am a voracious reader and love your choices and reasoning. And thanks for the tip on Earlene Fowler–I head to the library this afternoon. She seems to write quilting mysteries (from the titles online)–have you read Jennifer Chiaverini’s “Elm Creek Quilts” series? Great reads. More tips on non-LDS “clean” fave mysteries, romances, and fiction would be most welcome. Thanks for your insights, G.G.

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Annika said in August 3rd, 2010 at 9:22 am

Great peeks into opening paragraphs! I’ve always focused on that first line, but it’s true, the first paragraph can really set the tone for the entire book. No pressure right?